Tuesday, December 1, 2015

10 things I hate about you paragraph about tone

"I hate it when you stare." Tone is a type of language used to convey emotions. The 'I Hate' poem by Miranda uses tone to help convey her feelings.
 "I hate it when you make me laugh Even worse when you make me cry "  this shows all the emotion that she is feeling by using a certain tone a sad and very angry tone but that's calm and not shouting. She makes everyone feel vulnerable for her because she is starting to cry. The laugh and cry is juxtaposed in this quote because when she says laugh she is angry and when she says cry she is very sad and they are total opposites.
"I hate it so much it makes me sick, it even makes me rhyme" The tone here goes from angry to sarcastic when she says "it even makes me rhyme" this is like saying she didn't intend to make it rhyme she meant to get the message across.
In the monologue the 10 things i hate about you Miranda uses different tones to show all the emotions she wanted to tell the guy that hurt her.

Wednesday, November 25, 2015

Anatation of the monologe

Jargon = red
Understatment = blue
Hyperbole = Light blue
Juxtoposition = purple
Comparison = light red
Repetition = yellow
Replacement = green
Anaphora   = going to be some colour idk yet


4  I hate the way you talk to me 
3 And the way you cut your hair
4    I hate the way you drive my car
 3.   I  hate it when you stare

3   hate your big dumb combat boots
 4.  And the way you read my mind
5  I  hate you so much that it makes me sick
3    It even makes me rhyme

4       I hate the way you're always right
4       I hate it when you lie
3       I hate it when you make me laugh
4         Even worse when you make me cry


5          I hate the way you're not around
4         And the fact that you didn't call 
 3        But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you
6         Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all

Sunday, November 8, 2015

Kahoot Questions



  • A what is it question
  • A where it goes Question
  • A when do you write it Question
  • A Which of these is a good Example Question


Hook
   What is a hook
  1. Topic Sentence
  2. Gets the readers attention
  3. The Big IDEA!!
  4. An explanation
Where would you write the hook
  1. The beginning
  2. The middle
  3. The end
  4. Not at all

When writing your paragraph, when do you write the hook?
  1. After the thesis statement
  2. At the beginning
  3. As the title
  4. In the middle

What is a good example for a hook?
  1. A quote
  2. A boring sentence
  3. A sentence  introducing the topic 

Intorduction
 
What is an introduction?
  1. It explains the examples
  2. its presents the topic
  3. its starts the paragraph
  4. It ends the Paragraph
Where does the intro go?
  1. As the title
  2. After the Hook
  3. After the thesis
  4. After the examples
When Writing an outline when do you write the introduction?
  1. First
  2. Second
  3. Third
  4. Last
What is a good example of an intro?
  1. Explains the topic
  2. Restates the topic
  3. Introduces the examples
  4. It ends the paragraph
Thesis

What is a thesis?
  1. The Big idea!
  2. The question
  3. The 
  4. The 
Where does the thesis go?
  1. Just after the intro
  2. Just after the Examples
  3. The Finishing sentence
  4. The first sentence of your paragraph
When writing an outline when do you write the thesis?
  1. First
  2. second
  3. third
  4. Forth
What is a good example of a thesis statement?
  1. Explaining the topic
  2. Introducing the topic
  3. Explaining the use of the topic
  4. Restating the hook
Example:

What is an example?
  1. The idea of the paragraph
  2. Explaining the idea
  3. An example of the topic
  4. The main idea!
Where does the example go?
  1. Right after the thesis
  2. Just before the intro
  3. At the very end
  4. Just after the explanations
When writing an outline where do you put the examples?
  1. Right after you have the thesis statement
  2. just before the intro
  3. You don't at all
  4. Just after you have the topic
What is a good example of an example?
  1. A quote with the topic in it
  2. A Poem
  3. A song
  4. An sentence
Explanations

What is an explanation?
  1. Something that explains the example
  2. Something that explains the explanations
  3. Something that explains the thesis statement
  4. Something that explains the hook
Where does the explanation go?
  1. Right after the example
  2. Right after the hook
  3. Right after the thesis
  4. After the conclusion
When writing an outline when do you write the explanations?
  1. Just before everything
  2. after you have written the thesis
  3. right after the introduction
  4. just before the examples
What is a good explanation?
  1. Something that explains the example
  2. Something that explains the thesis
  3. Something that explains the intro
  4. Something that explains the conclusion
Conclusion:

What is a conclusion?
  1. Something that restates the topic at the end
  2. Wraps up your argument leaving the audience wanting more
  3. An opinion
  4. 'the end'
Where does the conclusion go?
  1. At the very end
  2. Before the example
  3. After the thesis
  4. before the thesis
When writing an outline when do you write your conclusion?
  1. Last after you have written everything
  2. Before EVERYTHING!!
  3. NEVER!!
  4. After the examples
What is a good conclusion
  1. Something that wraps up your argument
  2. Something that makes the audience want to read more
  3. Something that Tells your audience it the end of your paragraph
  4. Something that gives you magical powers.




Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Metaphors of sound of thunder

 "It closed its mouth in a death grin." Metaphors is the transference of a 'quality' from one thing to another.The sound of thunder uses metaphors brilliantly to describe the story in more detail. Time was a film run backward."  The quality of film running backwards  is being transferred to time.It closed its mouth in a death grin. The quality of the  death grin is transferred to the t-Rex . Eckels felt his eyelids blink over his stare, and the sign burned in this momentary darkness. The quality of the that is being transferred is the visual quality of the brightness of the the fire ' burning the sign in his brain' The author uses metaphors to explain things in more detail without writing to much.

Thursday, October 29, 2015

Foreshadowing in a sound of ⚡️

"We guarantee nothing" 

The sound of thunder is a brilliant use of foreshadowing.
Foreshadowing is a technique used to hint at what is going to happen later in the story. 
The title of the the story foreshadows the last line of the story. The story has one sound of thunder the t-Rex roaring but at the end of the story it changes because the sound of thunder ends up being the gun shot that killed Eckles. 
The sign at the start of the story foreshadows that at the end of the story that the sign changes. At the start of the story the sign for the place to go back in Time is TIME SAFARI, INC.
SAFARIS TO ANY YEAR IN THE PAST.YOU NAME THE ANIMAL.WE TAKE YOU THERE. YOU SHOOT IT this then changes to TYME SEFARI INC. SEFARIS TU ANY YEER EN THE PAST. YU NAIM THE ANIMALL. WEE TAEK YU THAIR YU SHOOT ITT which foreshadows that they changed the present.
"We guarantee nothing" is a way of foreshadowing because it saying  the have nothing to save people for. This is foreshadowing because at the end of the story Eckles dies because of travis shooting him because he killed a butterfly. Eckles asked if they guarantee anything and they said no and he dies at the end of the story. The writer of the sound  of thunder uses foreshadowing in a way that doesn't reveal it self immediatley. 

Monday, October 26, 2015

This is the post to make me free again

  1. What are the penalties for disobeying instructions?
  2. The penalties are a stiff penalty of $10,000 and government action
  3. What did some people want to do if Deutscher had won the election and why?
  4. Some people wanted to live in 1492 because Deutscher had the worst kind of dictatorship and was an anit-everything person.
  5. What does Travis tell Eckels is the best way to kill a dinosaur?
  6. You have to shoot two shots  in the eye to blind them and then go back to the brain
  7. How many years did the men travel? 
  8. They travelled 60 million, 2 thousand, and 55 years
  9. What is the antigravity metal path and why must the men stay on it?
  10. If off the path it could change the future forever. 
  11. What happened to the machine and the men’s clothes before they made their journey?
  12. They were sterilised with bleach.m
  13. Why do the men wear oxygen helmets?
  14. So they can't introduce their bacteria into an ancient atmosphere.
  15. What is unique about the dinosaurs that the men can shoot?
  16. They don't live much longer because they are going to be killed by nature.
  17. What does Eckels jokingly pretend to do?
  18. Eckles jokingly aims his rifle playfully.
  19. What does Eckels say when he sees the size of the dinosaur?
  20. He says the dinosaur can reach up and grab the moon
  21. How do the men know which dinosaurs they can shoot?
  22. They know by the red mark that they put on them before. 
  23. What do Billings and Kramer do after the dinosaur is dead?
  24. They barfed when the blood was spitting from their throat.
  25. What does Travis make Eckels do in order to go back with them?
  26. They are going to leave Eckels there on the path alone.
  27. What does Eckels notice about the sign on their return?
  28. It is spelled differently.
  29. What does Eckels find on the bottom of his boots? 
  30. A dead butterfly🦄🦄🦄🦄🦄🦄🦄🦄🦄🦄🦄🦄🦄

Keywords I did not know🦄

  1. phlegm
    saliva mixed with discharges from the respiratory passages
    Warm phlegm gathered in Eckels' throat; he swallowed and pushed it down. 


    Phlegm is a thick secretion of mucous
  2. glorious
    having great beauty and splendor
    all, everything fly back to seed, flee death, rush down to their beginnings, suns rise in western skies and set in glorious easts, moons eat themselves opposite to the custom, all and everything cupping one in another like Chinese boxes, rabbits into hats, all and everything returning to the fresh death



    When something is fabulous and gorgeous.
  3. sway
    pitching dangerously to one side
    Eckels swayed on the padded seat, his face pale, his jaw stiff.

    Back and forth.... Back and forth... Back and forth are you sea sick yet?
  4. envelop
    enclose or enfold completely with or as if with a covering
    The fog that had enveloped the Machine blew away and they were in an old time, a very old time indeed, three hunters and two Safari Heads with their blue metal guns across their knees. 


    When something is enveloped, it is wrapped around you. 
  5. franchise
    a business authorized to sell a company's goods or services
    We have to pay big graft to keep our franchise.

     franchise is a right granted by a government or corporation to an individual or group of individuals
  6. finicky
    exacting especially about details
    A Time Machine is finicky business.

    You reject any vegetable that isn't yellow. You like basmati rice, but detest jasmine, Arborio, and brown.


  7. annihilate
    kill in large numbers
    With a stamp of your foot, you annihilate first one, then a dozen, then a thousand, a million, a billion possible mice!


    Killing ends when the thing you are killing is dead 
  8. expendable
    suitable to be used up
    And the caveman, please note, is not just any expendable man, no!
  9. slay
    kill intentionally and with premeditation
    It is comparable to slaying some of Adam's grandchildren.
  10. infinitesimal
    immeasurably small
    Crushing certain plants could add up infinitesimally.
  11. disproportion
    imbalance among the parts of something
    A dead mouse here makes an insect imbalance there, a population disproportion later, a bad harvest further on, a depression, mass starvation, and finally, a change in social temperament in far-flung countries.
  12. correlate
    bring into a mutual, complementary, or reciprocal relation
    Then I correlate our arrival in the Past so that we meet the Monster not more than two minutes before he would have died anyway.
  13. bisect
    cut in half or cut in two
    "Up ahead, We'll bisect his trail in sixty seconds.
  14. resilient
    rebounding readily
    It came on great oiled, resilient, striding legs.
  15. poised
    marked by balance or equilibrium and readiness for action
    It ran with a gliding ballet step, far too poised and balanced for its ten tons.
  16. remit
    send in payment
    We'll remit half your fee."
  17. engulf
    flow over or cover completely
    A windstorm from the beast's mouth engulfed them in the stench of slime and old blood.
  18. malfunction
    fail to work properly
    Within, you could hear the sighs and murmurs as the furthest chambers of it died, the organs malfunctioning, liquids running a final instant from pocket to sac to spleen, everything shutting off, closing up forever.
  19. tonnage
    a tax imposed on ships that enter the US
    Bones cracked; the tonnage of its own flesh, off balance, dead weight, snapped the delicate forearms, caught underneath.
    In this sentence, the tonnage is the flesh itself which is so heavy it's crushing.
  20. stagnate
    exist in a changeless situation
    They gazed back at the ruined Monster, the stagnating mound, where already strange reptilian birds and golden insects were busy at the steaming armor.
  21. primeval
    having existed from the beginning
    Eckels turned slowly to regard the primeval garbage dump, that hill of nightmares and terror.
  22. subtle
    working or spreading in a hidden and usually injurious way
    Eckels stood smelling of the air, and there was a thing to the air, a chemical taint so subtle, so slight, that only a faint cry of his subliminal senses warned him it was there.
  23. subliminal
    below the threshold of conscious perception
    Eckels stood smelling of the air, and there was a thing to the air, a chemical taint so subtle, so slight, that only a faint cry of his subliminal senses warned him it was there.
  24. embedded
    enclosed firmly in a surrounding mass
    Embedded in the mud, glistening green and gold and black, was a butterfly, very beautiful and very dead.
  25. scrabble
    feel searchingly
    He scrabbled at the golden butterfly with shaking fingers. "Can't we," he pleaded to the world, to himself, to the officials, to the Machine, "can't we take it back, can't we make it alive again? Can't we start over? Can't we-"

Thursday, October 15, 2015

Paragraph on newspaper


Migrant crisis is because of desire to earn money in Europe . The daily telegraph is a British newspaper with a point of view that is negative about the migration crisis.
The daily telegraph is negative toward the migrant crisis. Europe migrant crisis creating "unprecedented" wave of criminality.  All these words are negative toward these people who are suffering the migrant crisis it says that this is creating " unprecedented" wave of criminality which could bean it could bring danger to Europe.
It's not war, but money, that drives people abroad. That is not going to change any time soon. These people are leaving their homes because of war and have had to leave EVERYTHING. This is very negative towards the migration crisis because it's saying they are only leaving and coming to Europe because the want to get money but most of these people are leaving to get to safety and. Provide for their families. These people are victims of a war and currently are suffering to provide for their family's and are taking risks and the daily telegraph  think negatively about these people and think they are only coming to Europe for money. 

Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Negative and positive keywords in their sentences and thesis homework

The orange= negative  turquoise= positive 

Thesis:  The daily telegraph is negative about the migrant crisis





Such was the scale of the threat that a new unit set up by Europol to gather intelligence on the trafficking gangs was already "swamped" by its caseload.

Europe's migration crisis creating "unprecedented wave of criminalinality” as gangs across the continent converge around the “honeypot” of people-smuggling, says head of Europol


The situation has escalated since the Eurostat figures were compiled, and today's inflow is on a far greater  scale.


It's not war, but money, that drives people abroad. That is not going to change any time soon

"This Great Migration was not expected because, for years, politicians believed that there would be less of it as poor countries became richer. In fact, the reverse is true



"The military learnt then what positions slowly begginign to work that this is a simply a refugee crisis


A photograph of a drowned child is heartbreaking, but should not change policy: a botched response can lead to many more dead children. Hundreds of Yemeni children will likely starve this winter, victims of its civil war – we won’t see the pictures, so we’re unlikely to see anyone petitioning Parliament about them. But it's no less of a tragedy 



Friday, October 9, 2015

More keywords!!!!!!

"Claimed asylum"

"It is not war, but money, that drives people abroad. That is not going to change any time soon"

"The military learnt then what positions slowly begginign to work that this is a simply a refugee crisis."

"Never has there been less hardship"

"Destitute"

"Poverty"

"Prosperous and peaceful"

"Extreme poverty"

"Million of souls displaced"

"Unemployment rates for immigrants"


Wednesday, October 7, 2015

Keywords and negative and positive homework:)

Keywords for both stories:

Europe's migration crisis creating "unprecedented wave of criminality” as gangs across the continent converge around the “honeypot” of people-smuggling, says head of Europol


Such was the scale of the threat that a new unit set up by Europol to gather intelligence on the trafficking gangs was already "swamped" by its caseload.


"exploit"

The situation has escalated since the Eurostat figures were compiled, and today's inflow is on a far greater scale. 




It is not war, but money, that drives people abroad. That is not going to change any time soon


"This Great Migration was not expected because, for years, politicians believed that there would be less of it as poor countries became richer. In fact, the reverse is true."

A photograph of a drowned child is heartbreaking, but should not change policy: a botched response can lead to many more dead children. Hundreds of Yemeni children will likely starve this winter, victims of its civil war – we won’t see the pictures, so we’re unlikely to see anyone petitioning Parliament about them. But it’s no less of a tragedy."


Th first story is negative because they are saying these people are taking over.
The second story is positive and negative because I gives empathy for these people and also gives a point that they shouldn't change the migration policy.




Tuesday, October 6, 2015

The daily telegraph




The daily telegraph:
Uses migration


http://www.telegraph.co.uk/comment/telegraph-view/9164667/Migration-moving-in-the-right-direction.html    The telegraphs point of view.




http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/worldnews/europe/hungary/11646416/Migration-threatens-European-civilisation-says-Hungary-PM.html
 By an agencie



http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/uknews/immigration/11792039/What-is-the-EU-for-if-not-the-migration-crisis.html by Janet daily





http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/worldnews/europe/sweden/11857145/Denmark-becomes-latest-migration-flashpoint-as-it-gives-refugees-free-passage-to-Sweden.html.  By the daily telegraph






http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/uknews/immigration/11831889/Europe-must-regain-control-of-migration-to-end-this-tragedy.html    By the daily telegraph






http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/worldnews/europe/11847750/The-Britain-bashers-moral-outrage-will-not-solve-this-migration-crisis.html



http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/worldnews/europe/germany/11790915/Germany-warns-Balkans-migrants-of-deportation.html



http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/worldnews/africaandindianocean/libya/11787950/Migrant-rescued-from-the-middle-of-the-sea.html



http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/worldnews/europe/france/11323276/Migrant-fights-migrant-in-Calais-riot.html




http://www.telegraph.co.uk/travel/destinations/europe/croatia/11875241/Migrant-crisis-advice-for-tourists-in-Europe.html




Friday, October 2, 2015

Definition

simile
ˈsɪmɪli/
noun
  1. a figure of speech involving the comparison of one thing with another thing of a different kind, used to make a description more emphatic or vivid (e.g. as brave as a lion ).
    • the use of similes as a method of comparison.
      "his audacious deployment of simile and metaphor"


      Vocabulary.com







      metaphor


      If you brag that "the world's your oyster," you're using a metaphor from Shakespeare, who knew a thing or two about figures of speech






      Hyperbole 




      Praising your favorite sports team is one thing, but if you call the team the most incredible group of humans ever to walk the earth, then you're going overboard and indulging in hyperbole.


      ANTONYM 


      A word that has the exact opposite meaning of another word is its antonym. Life is full of antonyms, from the "stop" and "go" of a traffic signal to side-by-side restroom doors labeled "men" and "women